Offer展示
The University of Edinburgh
爱丁堡大学
录取的项目:
MSc Psychology of Mental Health (Conversion)
心理健康理学硕士
项目官网链接:
https://www.ed.ac.uk/studying/postgraduate/degrees/index.php?r=site/view&edition=2023&id=883
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申请人背景
标化:QS前60,经济专业
均分:7.47/10
个人经历:一段实习经历;一段工作经历。
时间线
申请日期:2022.11.5
拿到offer时间:2023.3.9
文书节选
Andrew同学能够成功拿到最心仪的offer离不开北辰光优秀的文书——
No.1
Some say that social media and video platforms provide children with a good place to learn and might even be more effective. From my experience, that’s hardly the case.
No.2
Thus, in my final year in college, I dedicated all my free electives to psychology. I took Introduction to Psychology and Brain & Cognition. From the latter, I learned an important lesson, that our behaviours are swayed by physiological and environmental factors more often than we are ready to recognize.
申请故事
Andrew 同学第一年选择了 DIY,并没有拿到他想要的结果。在第二年,他决定选择北辰光的文书服务。
起初他对自己并不是很有信心,在给我们提供文书素材时觉得自己的背景非常空洞。
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但是这些都没有那么重要,在北辰光,能够定义一个人的只有他的理想的高度,而不是过去。我们深知一个人的过去是无法被改变的,但是能够改变未来。要改变未来,我们能做的就是扎扎实实把申请做好,而不是贩卖焦虑。
于是我们一步一步帮助 Andrew 改善简历和文书,并且在他申请的时候直接 Zoom 会议给他提供支持。
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最终他如愿以偿,拿到了爱丁堡的录取。
Andrew同学选择的是北辰光的文书定制服务,如果你也想和北辰光一起冲刺英国名校,欢迎联系我们~
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